welk gedicht?

Discussie in 'De lounge' gestart door DarkAngel25, 17 jun 2012.

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welke gedicht vinden jullie het mooist?

  1. gedicht 1

  2. gedicht 2

  3. gedicht 3

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  1. DarkAngel25

    DarkAngel25 VIP lid

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    welk gedicht is het mooiste?

    1)
    even though you were not there
    as i came upon this earth
    nor the one responsible
    or present at my birth
    you loved me, taught and guided me
    through these years as i have grown
    and you've never, ever made me feel
    like i was not your own

    2)
    even though you're not my dad
    i know that you'll be there
    wiith the little things you do
    you let me know you care

    you're always there to help
    whatever the need may be
    you've given of yourself
    and so unselfishly

    now you're becoming the dad
    that i have never known
    i'm drawn to you more every day
    for the kindness you have shown

    i just want to thank you
    and let you know i care
    a second dad as great as you
    is something very rare

    3)
    some people would say you're not my real dad
    but i know this isn't treu
    for you've been a real dad to me.
    in all the things we've been through
     
    we've had our ups and downs
    sometimes its hard to bend
    but you've always been there when i needed you
    and thats what matters in the end
     
    you've been patient,kind and firm
    over the years as i've grown
    ans i'm eternally grateful to you
    because you've treated me as your own
     
    for though we're not tied by bloodlines
    the love and trust you've given me
    is a precious gist, day after day
    and thats\'s what counts as a real dad to me
     
  2. Rundeeprunwild

    Rundeeprunwild Fanatiek lid

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    Ik heb nr 1 gestemd, maar vind nr 2 ook heel mooi.. Nummer 1 pakte me gelijk toen ik die las..
     
  3. Luffy90

    Luffy90 Niet meer actief

    Ik heb ook voor nummer 1 gekozen, kort maar krachtig.
     
  4. Panter

    Panter VIP lid

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    3!!!
     
  5. juna86

    juna86 Fanatiek lid

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    Nr 3
     
  6. SushiLover123

    SushiLover123 VIP lid

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    Was gestopt met lezen na de eerste. Mooi!
    Maar uit nieuwsgierigheid verder gelezen.
    2 en 3 halen het niet bij nummer 1 :)

    In de derde zitten overigens een paar foutjes; (treu, ans, \)
     
  7. DarkAngel25

    DarkAngel25 VIP lid

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    oke, het word gedicht nummer 1,

    ja spellingsfouten kan wel kloppen, had t even snel overgetypt.

    dank u voor de stemmen :D
     
  8. Ik ga ook voor nr. 1!
     
  9. EdN

    EdN VIP lid

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    1, de anderen zijn te lang.
     

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